It Started With a Love for Books—and Something Missing in Them
For as long as I can remember, I’ve read a book a day or in 2 days. And somewhere between the fifth hundred and the thousandth story, I noticed something that kept pulling me out of the page—stories that had potential, but felt just slightly unfinished. And that’s why i started beta reading books for authors
There were times the pacing faltered. Maybe the emotional arc didn’t land. Or maybe a subplot disappeared halfway through. The words stopped projecting visual imagery, and the book became uninteresting.
I didn’t know it then, but what I was feeling was the absence of developmental feedback—the kind of support that strengthens a manuscript before it reaches a final editor or the hands of readers.
And that’s where this journey began.
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Not Just Reading—But Listening to the Story Underneath
What I realized was this: beta reading wasn’t just about pointing out what didn’t work.
It was about listening—to what the story wanted to be. To what the author was trying to say. It was about offering feedback that respected the writer’s voice while gently highlighting where the reader might stumble.
And here’s something many authors miss—especially in early drafts: the words are there, but the visuals aren’t. A scene unfolds, but the reader can’t see it. The imagery is vague, the setting floats, the gestures feel generic.
Remember the adage: show and not tell.
As a beta reader and editor, I gently flag these moments. Not to critique, but to help you ground your story. When a reader can visualize a moment clearly, they connect. And that connection? That’s what carries them from page one to the end and makes the book an immersive read.
That’s the heart of my work now. Whether I’m doing a first-round beta read or a full developmental edit, my focus is always the same:
- Preserve the author’s intent
- Elevate the reader’s experience and evoke their emotions
- Strengthen the story without rewriting it into something else
Why This Matters—Especially If You’re an Author Without a Big Team
Most authors I work with don’t have a whole publishing house behind them. Some are self-publishing. Some are going the traditional route but still want a strong manuscript before querying. Others are working on their fourth book and know the power of a fresh set of eyes.
But no matter where they are, they all want the same thing:
To write a book that truly lands—with clarity, flow, and emotional impact.
That’s where I come in. I don’t believe in surface-level beta reads or vague feedback like “this didn’t work.” I offer in-depth responses, clear suggestions, and strategic questions that guide—not overwhelm.
What Makes My Process Different
I’ve now beta read over 1000 manuscripts across multiple genres—thrillers, fantasy, romance, memoir, literary fiction. And here’s what my clients tell me makes my feedback different:
- I don’t just read—I analyze. Every chapter is noted with pacing, tension, and plot flow.
- I ask the right questions. Not just “Why is this here?” but “What could happen if this changed?”
- I give suggestions. A possibility of something more that can be added to enhance the book.
- I respect your voice. Always. I’m not here to rewrite your book. I’m here to help you shape it.
- I care deeply. I treat every story like it matters—because it does.
And when an author writes back saying, “That’s exactly what I needed to hear”—that’s everything.
Editing Grew Naturally From This Foundation
After beta reading for a couple of years, many authors came back and said, “Do you do editing too?”
And I realized I already was. I was offering developmental-level feedback, story structure insights, and sometimes even in-line comments on flow and style.
So I leaned in. I began offering line editing, developmental editing, and feedback packages that gave authors what they needed most: clarity, strategy, and support.
No jargon. No ego. Just editing that understands your book and what you’re trying to build. And I always give suggestions at different points for you to see the realm of opportunities bringing about different subplots. All you need to do is use them as prompts and build up on your story.
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Who I Work Best With
I may not be the right fit for every author—and that’s okay.
But if you want honest, kind, and strategic feedback that puts your reader at the center while still honoring your story, then we’ll work well together. If you want a book that will be loved my majority of your readers, then I’m sure we will be an apt fit. Remember, all books will not be liked by all readers of the same genre.
I work best with:
- Authors who want their stories to feel emotionally complete
- Writers who are open to feedback—but want it handled with care
- Creators who know their book needs another pair of eyes before going live
- Those who love to have a sounding board that can show them something they never thought about
Remember, You Don’t Have to Figure It Out Alone
If you’re wondering whether your story works—whether the plot holds, whether the characters connect, whether your readers will stay up all night turning the pages and get a book hangover—I want you to know this:
You don’t have to figure it out alone.
That’s what beta reading and editing is for. To help you see the forest and the trees. And give your story the best possible chance to resonate. To move it from “almost there” to unforgettable. And above all, make it a bestseller.
I respect the work of all my authors and want you to achieve success in the literary world. Each book is a work of passion, and I want every one of them to get the maximum 5-star reviews.
Curious about how this works? Learn more about my Beta Reading & Editing Services here. I’d love to help you bring your story to life—clearly, powerfully, and in your own voice.
Not sure if your book is ready yet? Download my free “Beta Reader Checklist for Authors” to see what kind of feedback you need—and when.
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